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BOSS A Stepbrother Billionaire Romance eBook Victoria Villeneuve

I received an ARC for an honest review. Today. A few hours ago. This book was so good, I could NOT put it down. We meet shy, slightly overweight Tina at the beginning of the book. Her mother has become engaged to a wealthy man from a famous family. He sends Tina to an excellent private school where her future stepbrother also attends ( although she hasn't met him yet). She HAS met her first bully - a gorgeous, popular, Greek God of a boy who has decided to use Tina as his target. Can you guess who he turns out to be? Yep! Her stepbrother Keigan. And he torments her for 2 more years. Then the next time we meet Tina she's nearly starving, at poverty level, unemployed, and living alone in Seattle. She ran away from the wealthy family but we don't know why. Then she meets Keigan again and he offers her a job as his personal assistant. And the story gets better from there. All this time, since Tina met Keigan at age 14, she's been attracted to him, even when she's hated him. So doesn't this sound intriguing how working for him is going to pan out? He still teases her mercilessly. But haven't we been told that means a boy likes you??? Well, you'll have to read the story to find out and it's well worth it! You will fall in love with these characters, maybe not Keigan......for awhile. Loved it


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BOSS A Stepbrother Billionaire Romance eBook Victoria Villeneuve Reviews

This step-siblings love story started off pretty good by starting in present day and then reflecting back on events from the character's childhood to build the story. There was the love-hate feelings between the characters, and I thought it was going to be great. However, somewhere in the middle of the book, it was like the editor stopped editing. There were many grammatical errors, but even worse, there were continuity mishaps. Finally, when the love connection happened, it almost seemed gross because he had called her "sis" and had been a d-bag to her throughout the entire book. There was no flirtation or build up to indicate they were about to hook up....nothing! Then 3/4 of the way thru the book, the girl reveals her big secret and again, it was out of left field. There was no foreshadowing or any indication that events were about to happen.
I'm not familiar with this author, so I don't know if the problems with this book were a result of an inexperienced author, or if it just needs to go through the editing and revising steps again. I think it is a good story, but it needs a lot of work.
The book had 275 pages or 2723 locations on my kindle. The book was about a girl, named Tina and a man, named Kiegan. Tina's mother married Kiegan's father, when she was, 14 years old. Keigan, who was rich and a year older, began to make Tina's life a living hell. He harassed the insecure girl, by making fun of and belittling her, when ever, he was in the mood. He even stole, her college essay, which possibly cost her an admission to Harvard. The book contained a few so, so sex and oral sex scenes. The Tina character, was weak and irritating. She was tormented, by Keigan for years and yet as soon as he says jump, she says, how high. She forgave and forgot to quickly for my tastes. Kiegan was horrible, and then he was redeemed, all of a sudden, and confessing his love. The book is told, solely, thru, Tina's point of view. You never get to hear his thoughts, which bothered me.
For me, this is one of those books that really wants to be good. It is on the verge, but it is not quite there. I'm not a fan of the author's style of writing. It gets too descriptive in some areas and not enough in others. A few scenes really had no point and were redundant.

I really wanted to not like Kiegan like we're supposed to, but I had zero feelings. The author was passive in describing why he was so awful. We saw a few instances where he was not very nice and it would be humiliating, but the execution wasn't there for me. Mostly Tina would say something like "he made my life hell." So we are led to believe that he was horrible to her for two years. Granted the thing with Harvard was awful and that alone could make anyone hold a grudge. That's what we are led to believe. Therefore, I have a hard time with the fact that Tina would so easily accept a job from him. Yes, she is desperate, but it took the course of half a meal for her to agree.

The kicker for me was the grammar mistakes. Overuse of commas, incorrect words, run on sentences and incomplete sentences. Also, this is a preference, but I do not like all the adverbs. In almost every sentence there's an adverb. Some sentences have multiple adverbs and sometimes they are even italicized. This was the sentence that made me stop reading. "I made my way slowly through the room, unconsciously going as quietly as I could, like I didn't belong here and if I made any noise I'd be caught and kicked out, sent back to a normal queen room like I was used to." If you are fine with this sentence then the story and characters may be enough for you to enjoy. I stopped at 43%. I hate not finishing especially if giving a review, but I doubt I will get back to this one.
I received an ARC for an honest review. Today. A few hours ago. This book was so good, I could NOT put it down. We meet shy, slightly overweight Tina at the beginning of the book. Her mother has become engaged to a wealthy man from a famous family. He sends Tina to an excellent private school where her future stepbrother also attends ( although she hasn't met him yet). She HAS met her first bully - a gorgeous, popular, Greek God of a boy who has decided to use Tina as his target. Can you guess who he turns out to be? Yep! Her stepbrother Keigan. And he torments her for 2 more years. Then the next time we meet Tina she's nearly starving, at poverty level, unemployed, and living alone in Seattle. She ran away from the wealthy family but we don't know why. Then she meets Keigan again and he offers her a job as his personal assistant. And the story gets better from there. All this time, since Tina met Keigan at age 14, she's been attracted to him, even when she's hated him. So doesn't this sound intriguing how working for him is going to pan out? He still teases her mercilessly. But haven't we been told that means a boy likes you??? Well, you'll have to read the story to find out and it's well worth it! You will fall in love with these characters, maybe not Keigan......for awhile. Loved it